Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room or choose by yourself?
The university is an academic center the main responsibility, of which is to prepare students for having a both successful professional and personal life. As a matter of fact, university form a fundamental part of a persons' education and make students decide their path. Stemming from this fact, a relevant question that is a moot point is whether university should be responsible for choosing roommate and share a room or students should opt for by themselves. Due to controversial nature of this question there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that hallmarks of students are closer together and they are able to recognize each other and appreciate the situation especially in dorm better than university. In the ensuing paragraphs some convincing reason will be delineated to collaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, when students accept in a high ranked university, they will definitely face different trials and tribulations either on campus or off campus. Indeed, one of the most significant problems of vast majorities of students that go to different cities for continuing their education is habitat. Broadly speaking, one of the heavy burdens on the shoulder of universities is to patronize these students and provide an appropriate place to live. But in some case university is force to share a room between two or more students. Actually, it is better for students to select roommate by their own decision because they are familiar with various personality and conformity. As far as I am concerned, it can be extremely helpful for students if they select for a student with same major due to the fact that a great opportunity will provide to study together. To elucidate more on this issue, students will be able to identify their weaknesses and bend over backwards to overcome obstacles. In this case, students could keep their incentive and reach their pinnacle of their education. Otherwise, dropout rate may increase drastically. As a vivid example, studies have shown that more than 90 percent of students who opt for their roommate have been more successful in their education and gaining a decent job.
Another reason that cannot go unnoticed is that students will learn how to make a sound decision and confront difficulties until find a solution in their life. To put it in general word, crowds of students prior to entering university have been dependent on their parents and were not informed of various situation. Indeed, if university allow students to choose their roomy, they contribute greatly to the students' independency. Going into the depth, students will gain valuable information about outanemous life and in this case, they can enhance their self-confidence. However, what was alluded to above can't be overgeneralized to the contexts. Alongside with the countless merits it has, indisputably, people who work in university are experienced, informed people and are able to predict different situation that may one day come up. In this case, they can share a room better among students than any other could do.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that students during their education face various difficulties and share a room and select a roommate in dormitory is one of the utmost important issue not only for students but also for university. In fact, students are more able than any other to choose a roommate because of identical similarities and consistency. In addition, they will experience their independent life and learn how to make a right decision in critical circumstances.
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...ght decision in critical circumstances.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'in general', 'as a matter of fact', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230889235569 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.152886115445 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0904836193448 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0436817472699 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0499219968799 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129485179407 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0343213728549 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.969014542 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0405616224649 0.0309702414327 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0015600624025 0.00188951952338 83% => OK
Determiners: 0.0826833073323 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0265210608424 0.0209618222197 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0171606864275 0.0139019557991 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3609.0 2387.08602151 151% => OK
No of words: 586.0 408.028673835 144% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15870307167 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368600682594 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.305460750853 0.251872472559 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.249146757679 0.174417080927 143% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150170648464 0.112833075102 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.969014542 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4795221843 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.3955531848 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5384615385 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6639159122 48.84282405 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.807692308 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 53.0845366238 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.60126582278 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190114433368 0.300154397459 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0786947077923 0.103427244359 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0512769353179 0.0752933317313 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.448903903299 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120685344131 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076365440967 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474601023072 0.0781384742642 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.533405329193 0.336927656856 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0389488464193 0.067059652881 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147409551884 0.210909579961 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315029264955 0.0618886996521 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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