?? You are going to start a new business. Which of the following do you feel is most important to be successful:
a) lots of money
b) lots of friends
c) lots of products.
It goes without saying that starting a new business can be impacted by many factors. While some people think that the key to a successful business is having lots of friends or lots of products, I definitely prefer having lots of money. I feel this way for the two reasons that I will explain in my following essay.
To begin with, one of the reasons that supports the idea of starting a business with lots of money is because it is important to be financially safe. A business can meet its everyday business needs and avoid taking on debt even during emergency situations such as pandemics. That way, the business has more control over its activities. I remember, when my mother and aunt started their spa business, it was right before the Covid-19 lockdown. It was not the best time to start a business, especially when 40% of small businesses in that area went bankrupt. Luckily, when they started the business, they had a good amount of money at the bank to survive through these difficult times. Not only did they have enough money to pay the rent throughout the lockdown, but also they managed to keep their prices the same as well as the quality of their services. If they had not had lots of money to survive this pandemic, they would never have become as successful as they are right now.
Another reason why I believe that money is important for a successful business is because you can afford to have better customer service. According to recent studies, when customers look for a business to use, the first thing they pay attention to is their customer service. Money will definitely help you to have better technologies to contact your customers, hire more employees as well as train them better. For example, when my father started his dental business, he had saved some money to start it with. He wanted to make sure that his employees communicated with his patients well. Therefore, he bought the newest and most expensive technologies. In addition, he paid himself to send his employees to the advanced customer service courses. This investment had a good impact on his business, which wouldn’t happen if he didn’t have enough money to start it with.
To sum up, I absolutely agree with the idea that you need lots of money for a successful business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i feel, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74811083123 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56073061226 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51637279597 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.592904555 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301665185564 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884273394314 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855019891134 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220273415129 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866270585871 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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