Being a part of a club or an organization have many benefits such as meeting new people, enlarging business contacts, socializing and so on. There are leaders of these kinds of groups who try to improve and contribute to them. Therefore, I strongly agree that the honesty of the leader is the most significant thing for his/her election. I explained my reasons in this essay.
First of all, the joiners of these groups are there for a reason and maybe these reasons are based on helping others, finding jobs, providing poor people or organizing huge/impressive events. That is why, choosing a strong, hardworking and honest leader is a must to make these group active and successful. If I would have to help one to make him/her leader, I definitely look for these characteristics for the good of the members and the group itself. Moreover, there are many sayings, stories and idioms about not to lie to the others. Because, true stories always find a way to come out.
Secondly, honesty means trust and reliable people can manage their work more efficiently since they got the faith of the other members. Because, the members would have no doubt nighter about the leader nor about the action that he/she made. Hence, the capacity of the group can be used totally and the next actions or organizations can be guarantied. The leader of the club should not make things work for his/her benefits. That person must watch the benefits of the group and members. If the better decisions are taken for the group, then the leadership continues otherwise it won't take long time. Also, the honesty, reliability and ability to do things of the leader could easily spread to others by ear.
Thirdly, sometimes one mistake can erase many rights. If the leader is not honest in his/her presidency, maybe that would be the last work he/she could have done. Because, the wrongs made by the leader can end the life of the club since these clubs are dependent on some authorities. No authority wants a bed reputation. So, it would be easier to end a continuity of a club than changing the leader. In my view, a leader should not be selfish.
As a summary, I believe that a leader must be honest for both himself/herself and the other members. Because, lying can harm the groups actions and reputations and also damages the trust to that person irreversibly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ong, hardworking and honest leader is a must to make these group active and successful....
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... idioms about not to lie to the others. Because, true stories always find a way to come...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7881773399 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63005290561 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514778325123 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1576035288 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19316330466 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559150968166 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540563849181 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116445635647 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368174146714 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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