World consist of too many different groups of people with different culture and characters and views in which if anyone wants to know about them, should starts an expanded researches to learn only about small parts of them.in my opinion one way to discovery among the people to learn about them is to investigate what they wear.i believe that, what people wear comes from an intrinsic spirit and how they are grown up are affected on it. In the following, I will explain why we can find out more about people based on what they wear.
First and foremost is that most of the time clothes show people’s culture, for instance, Indian women wear their traditional costume. What they called Surry.most of surries are colorful and it’s texture made of silk which is colored with bright and energetic color like orange, red, Blue,…. Their colors show that how this person is happy and try to be happy even they might experience lots of unfortunate event in their life. moreover, women wear some accessories which are shining and have a musical voice when they walking. What it can understand that music is combined in their life. therefore it probably is acceptable that clothes can teach us lots of thing about people who wear that.
The second reason which I can bring for my agreement is that besides we can learn about the culture we can understand about people’s character. For example, a person who is sad and has depression most of the time try to wear dark and simple clothes. they want to feel free thus wear simple dresses because any complexity in clothes would effect on their nerve and make them anxious. as they also prefer to be in a dark place, most of them wear dark clothes what psychologists believe that dark area provides calmness for them in contrast to normal people who feel fear by dark. however, we should consider that dark clothes don’t have the same meaning in all area for example in a special party it uses as a formal dress for men and women. But in both situations, it can shows what character does the owner of clothes has.
In general, people wear what they like and what is made them calm. because there is aim behind the people’s clothes. if we could find out about it, we would learn about people and why they love to wear this kind of clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in contrast, in general, kind of, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68058968059 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37019629416 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511056511057 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.7229149542 48.9658058833 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.058823529 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328697248661 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11377545582 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689711164578 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215365288801 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196387972726 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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