Everyday many people accept a variety of gifts for a variety of reasons worldwide. Not only items or goods can be gifted but also money have become a preferable thing to take as a gift. If I had a gift like money, I would buy a piece of jewellery because it is more beneficial to invest in the attribute of luxury that will be kept throughout the times.
When people take the gift like money, they immediately face a challenging dilemma about what they should spend the money to keep the memory of the gift. The vast majority of contemporaries would prefer buying something long-lasting to emphasis their financial status such as a car, home decor, various technological devices. In my opinion, jewellery can be also considered as everlasting and prestigious at all times because we witness the magnificent power of precious stones or metals, which representatives of the aristocracy had worn as decoration the long times ago. Moreover, after the hundreds of years, we still acknowledge the dominance of prestige taken from wearing expensive jewellery since the famous celebrities or popular representatives of society try to acquire the exclusive jewellery brands.
Although modern society tends to keep memories by filling their life with memorable moments like attending concerts or travelling, they can not deny the fact that jewellery is also the attribute of the history and can be kept as a family accessory or even national antiquity. For instance, not all people are able to convey the atmosphere of the actions or situations without biases because they were the only witnesses of the moments and others are also not capable to understand them. In order to do it, people should experience all of the moments together that is impossible. Therefore, humans have found a more effective way to transmit their memories and feelings through jewellery such as wedding rings or precious stones obtained heritably which keep all the memories of sad or auspicious stories of their families. Indeed, it is a pleasure to spend presented money on exquisite accessories to leave the latter to the future generation.
Finally, jewellery is the object of art which is appreciated for the specific handmade techniques and design. It is believed that jewellery is considered to be a piece of art because stone cutting methods or metal melting have been always a complicated high-class occupation which immediately implies the expensive cost of the jewellery. Furthermore, people have exploited a piece of jewellery as financial sustainability throughout times by aiming to produce, to sell and to buy the most impeccable of the jewellery forecasting the benefits from the price rises. The acquisition of a piece of jewellery is a monetary contribution to the future which nobody can contradict.
In conclusion, it is obvious that not all people agree that money as a gift should be spent on precious accessories. Nevertheless, I believe that money is entirely appropriate to be invested in jewellery because of their beauty as art object, prestige and welfare.
- The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons there relevant. 56
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.to what extent do you agree or disagree?what other measures do you think might be effective? 73
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured 61
- Organized tours to remote community and other countries are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the local environment? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
Everyday many people accept a variety of gifts f...
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Line 2, column 707, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...m wearing expensive jewellery since the famous celebrities or popular representatives of society t...
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Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rder to do it, people should experience all of the moments together that is impossible. Th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2560.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.140562249 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99824951753 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 843.3 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9681155286 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.222222222 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149928207524 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526990281366 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405311369423 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929271982619 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360486151277 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.