You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
In today’s world, investment is going to be an inevitable factor in the process of becoming prosperous. There are a lot of ways to proceed to this, so, it will be a bit challenging to choose the best way. Even though someone may claim that by buying a house you will be more successful in investment, I assert that purchasing a business is way better than merely using all of your money to buy a house. There are two main reasons why I feel this way, which I will explain in the following passage.
The first and the most significant reason that we must consider is that in different conditions, we should find the best answer to our problem. In other words, the important point is to choose a business that economically benefits us better in comparison with other businesses. In some societies, or in some certain eras, it is not economically suitable to buy a house in order to invest on it. My brother, Jack, who is a chairman of a huge business organization, as a case in point, told me that, if he had a second chance to use their last year’s organizations budget for investment, definitely this time he would consider the market’s situation, and thereafter choose a business on the basis of result which are obtained from the investigation. Thus, it is necessary to invest your money on prospective business instead of buying a house, in order to become prosperous.
Secondly, house prices may periodically alter. You are not sure about what is happening in future, so, a common sense tells us not invest our money on a house. For instance, research about Canada’s economy which was done by University of Western Ontario on May 25, 2003, revealed that house prices change 5 times a year in Canada. If people had purchased a house in order to investment, they would probably have failed, as a wise person said that, “The more you take advantage of other’s experiences, the more success you will get in your future activities.” Consequently, investing money on a house would not be a perfect idea for business.
Taking into account all factors mentioned, although some persons became rich by purchasing houses, but, it is obvious that purchasing a business is a better response to the problem. As an economics student, I, personally, would rather to purchase a business instead of buying a house, if I had enough money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'choosing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: choosing
... this, so, it will be a bit challenging to choose the best way. Even though someone may c...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ou are not sure about what is happening in future, so, a common sense tells us not invest...
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Line 5, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill get in your future activities.' Consequently, investing money on a house...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223602484472 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0766045548654 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047619047619 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0600414078675 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12215320911 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0351966873706 0.0351676179071 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99434460916 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0310559006211 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0973084886128 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0248447204969 0.0209618222197 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0144927536232 0.0139019557991 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2368.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 406.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83251231527 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347290640394 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238916256158 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187192118227 0.174417080927 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125615763547 0.112833075102 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99434460916 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541871921182 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.8329220126 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0666666667 20.5533526081 132% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.253645647 48.84282405 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.866666667 120.699889404 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0666666667 20.5533526081 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 50.9582922824 45.7405998639 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.52066115702 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303206332932 0.300154397459 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.083644094899 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0416141887759 0.0752933317313 55% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542015421743 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109146751753 0.151897553556 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127196419886 0.114077575197 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750889292816 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.31464526436 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.11975351764 0.067059652881 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211146839539 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255901815233 0.0618886996521 41% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.