With great advancement in technology, tourism has greatly increased. Nowadays, people can easily visit other countries. If I were given the opportunity to visit a foreign country, I would love to go United States of America. I feel this because of several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, USA is a developed country and blessed with mesmerizing works of architects and beauty of nature. In USA, we can enjoy sunbath on beaches, sightseeing, great museums etc. Visiting USA is like dream come true for me. My brother, Harman, has been living in USA since last 10 years. He told me that we can enjoy wide variety of views in USA. If you are a nature lover, then you can go to USA. If you want to see advancement in science, then you can visit USA. It’s a place for all types of people. It is such a large country that exploring the whole USA is impossible even in one full year. There are never ending lists of museums, beaches, landscape views, festival celebrations etc.
Further, there are many restaurants in USA. Anyone visiting USA will definitely enjoy the variety of cuisines in those restaurants. I love eating food and I always want to try different varieties of food. So, visiting USA is like an opportunity for me to taste those variety of foods . I read about the different cuisines served in USA in a food magazine. Influenced by the magazine and my personal love for food, I always wanted to go USA so as to satisfy my taste buds with those different variety of foods.
In conclusion, I always wanted to go to USA. If given a chance to visit any foreign country, without thinking for a second, I would say USA. This is because I always wanted to appreciate the great works of architects and nature’s beauty in USA and because USA offers variety of cuisines so I want to enjoy those variety of foods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this variety' or 'those varieties'?
Suggestion: this variety; those varieties
... is like an opportunity for me to taste those variety of foods . I read about the different c...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y for me to taste those variety of foods . I read about the different cuisines ser...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ove for food, I always wanted to go USA so as to satisfy my taste buds with those differ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this variety' or 'those varieties'?
Suggestion: this variety; those varieties
... variety of cuisines so I want to enjoy those variety of foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, then, as to, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62951807229 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65054102214 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4222170305 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8260869565 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4347826087 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82608695652 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170420788927 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05911518767 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671043848972 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111611804668 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450493470893 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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