YOU SHOULD NOT BELIEVE EVERYTHING YOU READ IN NEWSPAPERS.
YOU SHOULD NOT BELIEVE EVERYTHING YOU READ IN NEWSPAPERS.
Nowadays no one is neutral. Everyone has a way of thinking which believes is the true and thinks that other people are wrong. However, we are living in a modern century and most of the people are well educated but still there are so many problems when two man with different beliefs meet and they are just looking for a way to force the other one to change his mind. So that’s why newspapers or television programs are not really reliable. Here is two reasons of mine why I thinks we should not believe everything we read in newspapers.
First, none of newspapers are neutral, each of them is somehow related to one political flow and they just try to make that political flow satisfied and more powerful by publishing different news which may some of them not be true. Sometimes they even lie about their opponent and tries to ruin their public face and gain more popularity for themselves. It is completely obvious during elections and we can see that how much powerful some of newspapers are why so they can change the way people think and change the result of elections in this way. I think it is something that happened during the last election in the united states. News agencies had a deep effect on the result of election and by publishing some information which some of them were almost top secret could drop the popularity of Clinton.
Second, we should not think inside the box. If we follow news via just some news sources we will stuck into a solid attitude and mental flow toward different things happening around us and we cannot see the other side of the event. Maybe the reality is not as we assumed. Each time I hear a news i check it from different sources even, from different countries and try to make sure that I know all aspects of the topic. However, I cannot still be sure that I know all the truth, but at least I can see the topic from different views and think better about it. Last month I read a news about a new investment in a company in the city I live, Qazvin and found it really interesting. But when I checked the news from other news agencies I found out it was just a lie to convince people that investing in that company is good and they should do that too.
To cut the long story short, all I want to say is that unfortunately we live in a world where is not reliable at all. You cannot be sure that who is telling the truth and who is not. So I believe we should not believe everything we read in newspapers, why so everyone is on the of side whom can bring some value for him.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...able. Here is two reasons of mine why I thinks we should not believe everything we rea...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the newspapers') or simply say ''some newspapers''.
Suggestion: some of the newspapers; some newspapers
...s and we can see that how much powerful some of newspapers are why so they can change the way peop...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
...news via just some news sources we will stuck into a solid attitude and mental flow t...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... as we assumed. Each time I hear a news i check it from different sources even, f...
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Line 7, column 579, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...hink better about it. Last month I read a news about a new investment in a company in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, really, second, so, still, well, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38796680498 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38500885689 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454356846473 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0020785732 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9523809524 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20079717516 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885579909071 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.218567310016 0.0737576698707 296% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284211913113 0.150856017488 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.368879125073 0.0645574589148 571% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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