young decision in nowadays
Many years before in the past, the biggest decisions were made by older member of family. Nowadays, everyone tries to make strong decisions by her/himself which can bring huge alteration in their life in everywhere of world. young people extremely enthusiastic to be engage in making decision that are really necessary for their prosperous and comfortable life. Some factor that coerce and compel youth’s individuals to make decision by them self is awareness of laws with knowledge as well as changing in demands and circumstance of life oblige young’s to be a good decision maker. in my perspective view, in the following discussing, I would like to address some reasons to agree with statement.
One reason that come in my mind is knowledge and experience which significant for youths to decide for special issues. in past years, there was a bad tradition and custom that all big decisions were made by preside of family, they did not allow young to decide even issues which were belongs to them like marriage, selection of career and faculty. in addition, director of family acted aggressively and brutally without any heed to ideas and thoughts of youths. In fact, education can bring a tremendous opportunity for young to think and make decision in special field. So, educated youths attempt to use their tricks and technics for making strong decision which obtained from now technologies and experiences as well as youths use their thoughts and ideas to prove their own abilities. Moreover, up to now some advice and decision of old people admirable and practicable So, education and using experiences of family and friends can assist in decision making.
Second reason which commonly have seen between adolescents changing in demands in order to make decision for modern life and some rivalries among wealthy and destitute families. Because Youths always compare their life with neighbors and concentrate on weakness of their family and searching several ways how to decide to reach a comfortable, delightful and pleasurable life. youths always struggle with challenges to find solution for their necessities and some important requirements such as: preparation of new cloths, enough allowance for sightseeing and misspend money with their alter ago. lacks of above facilities and increasing level of life, compel young to mediate and ponder for making a grade decision progressively. In current situations, youth do not pay attention to decision and advice of family because circumstance changed and all youths have many immense dreams and wishes which require special decision making by themselves. Mentioned dreams would not accept by older and pessimistic people. Whereas, young prefer to decide by themselves in all aspects of life which rely on prosperous and modern life like putting on new clothes, getting marriage with selected girl, and choosing career to be useful for its owner.
From all reasons above, I can strongly have a conclusion that in nowadays life, young can decide for their personal life, they would participate in many big plans eagerly and enthusiastically. I am optimistic that teenager can decide to bring dramatic change in their life by their knowledge and others experiences. on the other hand, heed to sayings and deeds of old people also useful for them so, if they decide accurately, they will bring a better and tranquil life which has a bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, second, so, thus, well, whereas, as to, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 13.8261648746 253% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2857.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 550.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19454545455 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75323941435 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498181818182 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.9 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6533562039 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.047619048 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1904761905 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236881152275 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805192178304 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765814393189 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154718951786 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062589810749 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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