a young people enjoj life than older people
A young person who is below thirty years old, an older person who is above sixty years old. Both of these people have different abilities, talents, behaviours, and they behave separately in their communities to different situations. I think, nowadays young people would enjoy life than older people, because, there are some reasons that support my opinion in next paragraphs.
First of all, today many new tools are created and invented, and all of them are used usually by young people. For example, a game equipment like the Playstation, that gaming tool is more famous around the World and it is used regularly by young people, and they would like to play with it with their friend in their free time. That is the fun facility which done by young.
Also, our living conditions have more social places including cinemas, parks, shopping malls, etc. For joining to these areas, people should be the young, because people who want to visit there need more energies, all these facilities are effortless so older people would be tired if they like visititing these places. For instance, shopping malls are everywhere, and there are a lot of stores, and it is big than before, in buying activities people would be tired, they may be ill, for that reasons older would not like that.
In addition, in almost all countries , education would be more flexible and free. There could be online education options. All these countries offer to their members that if their residents want not like to attend traditional education. Especially young people like, they could opt that choise and they would study in their home with an internet connection. Although, their parents do not like, but their children enjoy funnily and severely.
In contrast, todays technologies sometimes could be boring for young children. For example, GPS technology that is used by families to follow their infants with mobile phones. Children do not like that , because they sometimes would be with their girlfriends or boyfriends secretly.
In conclusion, taking account of all reasons, the most parts of young children have enjoyed their life for decades more than older people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'game equipment'.
Suggestion: game equipment
...d usually by young people. For example, a game equipment like the Playstation, that gaming tool ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... In addition, in almost all countries , education would be more flexible and fr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rely. In contrast, todays technologies sometimes could be boring for young chil...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mobile phones. Children do not like that , because they sometimes would be with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08732394366 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45348731337 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532394366197 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8614676242 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250740016167 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811847672004 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975034574299 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146416858649 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102115291237 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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