Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Enjoying life is a means for every individual to get a break from the daily routine. People find several ways to enjoy life like going on a holiday, playing their favorite sport, doing some leisure activities, etc. Such activities give them immense pleasure and joy and also, relaxes their stress from their monotonous lives. Some people think that young people enjoy their life more than older people do. However, in my opinion, I think the other way round. I personally believe that the opposite is true in reality.
Firstly, young people today are trapped in a world full of competition. In this highly competitive world, people wish to excel in all spheres. They desire to rise to the apex level at the earliest possible time. Such hunger for excellence and success has made the young generation of today seldom finding time to enjoy in life. For instance, youngsters in America are busy working around in their office all day long that they do not find time for themselves to engage in some health and fitness activities. Also, the average age for marriage among the American teenagers has considerably risen above 30 and all this has been attributed to the desire to excel and succeed in their professional life.
Second, the world today is advancing on the technological front. The youngsters are busy exploring the modern electronic gadgets all day. They are seldom interested in playing outdoor sports which keep them physically and mentally strong. As a result, the fitness levels of the younger generation has been declining every year. In fact, today’s youngsters are acquiring some of the most complex diseases which shouldn’t have been acquired at such a young age. For instance, in the past, the most common disease of diabetes occurred at ages after 40 years whereas today it is occurring at relatively lower ages. Therefore, it once proves that the older people really do enjoy life better than the young ones.
Finally, older people live their lives free of worries. They don’t have any work-related stress in their minds as most of them have retired from their workplaces. So, as a result, they enjoy their lives to the fullest free of any tensions. At this age, they are mostly involved in health and fitness related activities and also, in social activities. Therefore, engaging in such activities help them to get the most out of their remaining life before their natural death.
In conclusion, with the increasing complexities in today’s world, young people generally enjoy their life less than old people do. They are mostly focused on their work and career and rarely find time for their leisure purpose. On the other hand, old people live a life free of any stress and tend to enjoy their life in every possible manner.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99137931034 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53040003676 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487068965517 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6327094996 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1851851852 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.96296296296 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267913377832 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890942463389 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144974034654 0.0737576698707 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181724298981 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991900194508 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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