Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Yes, I agree that young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Life is full of joy and happiness when one is young and full of energy, when one does not have any care for anyone and does not have much knowledge or experi- ence of bitterness and sorrow of life.
Young people can enjoy life because they are usually free of many diseases the older people suffer from. They can easily run, jump and do many things which is not possible for many olders. Thus physical fitness allow them to enjoy the life.
They can enjoy life because they do not need to care for earning, for rent and pay other utilities bills. Finacial difficulties does not impress their young heart as much as doest to the adults. They usually deopend on their gardians for money. Therefore, they do not need to face the stresses concerning earning and maintain- ing daily livelihood.
Unlike older people they are never alone. At home they are accompanied by either parents or other family members. at the streets they have their friends. If they do not have friends in a new community, they can make them very easily which could not be said about adults. In order to communicate with the other chil- dren they do not feel any barrier or complexity.
Being young they do not face many problems of life which adults do. They do not have enough knowledge about life which can make them unhappy. They seldom think about aging and death. They think that they would never grow old and die.
Therefore, there are many things in youth like young age, company, lack of care for money and lack of knowledg about the dark sides of life make them to feel happy and enjoy their life more than older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6059602649 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03233855016 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486754966887 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1038211743 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2105263158 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21052631579 5.45110844103 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299249950604 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117739806641 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157057362194 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216896391059 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203242208221 0.0645574589148 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.