Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that there is a lot of social, cultural, psychological and physiological reasons that young people have more enthusiastic to enjoy a happy life. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who agrue that this is a completely misunderstanding that older ones lower enjoy life, even some of them are spend more time for happiness than young people do. However, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that young people enjoy life more than older people do.
First and foremost, there are some misbeliefs about human age and some sets of specific behaviors that society expected from people in older ages. For exmple, my grand mother was a successful athlete in the past. Now she has 80 years old, but she still has a health and strong body. Nonetheless, when I asked her to went with me to a mountaion climbing trip, she refued. The reason for her decision was just other people jujdment about her. Simply, she afraid from her friends reaction to her work, because these kinds of hobbies are not acceptable in our culture during old ages.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that young people have more time for entertainments. Most people between ages 20 to 30 are still single. Whereby, they are not responsible about any other person. Nevertheless, married people should spend most of their time with their family, for example, carring children and cleaning house that maybe are not very enjoyable for anyone. Moreover, parents should work so hard to provide enough financial support for their children.
Finally, yet importantly, older people have lesser eager and courage to take risks. For example, it is very interesting to me to spend even whole of my saved money to travel to my favorite country. However, an older person never do this. They believe that this is a crazy decision. Most older people prefered to have enough money deposite in the bank for some unexpected happens. They avoid from any threatheneds for example participating in skat play even they previosly really enjoy it.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I am convienced that young people enjoy life more than older ones.
- TPO 49 73
- TPO 45 63
- In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...lower enjoy life, even some of them are spend more time for happiness than young peop...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: HAVE_CD_YEARS[1]
Message: This phrase is used with 'be': 'is 80 years old'.
Suggestion: is 80 years old
...successful athlete in the past. Now she has 80 years old, but she still has a health and strong ...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'Most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: Older
... believe that this is a crazy decision. Most older people prefered to have enough money de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, really, so, still, then, thus, even so, for example, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97567567568 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5673243128 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7959587875 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381504548253 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114780846971 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149420710823 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243502238001 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172889410033 0.0645574589148 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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