Young people have no influence on important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
It is critically important to make wise decisions in order to take the community to the next level.In my opinion, I believe that the younger generations have a great impact on making cogent decisions towards the future of the society.I feel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in my body paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that youngsters are more knowledgeable and have gotten tremendous experience, therefore they can defend themselves since they know their rights.Also, they can liberate the so-called illiterates in order to make good decisions that could benefit the masses.My own illustration is a compelling example of this.In Nigeria, people had experience a bad governance due to the fact that the country is been ruled by unruly people for 10 years, due to the fact that the younger generations are not informed.However, these days,youngsters have come up with ideas on how they would make protest, and put in their best in order to ensure that the right person govern the country.In Fact, they have made some moves by writing the minister for youths, and also they ensure they keep track with the human rights.All these actually paved the way because of the adequate knowledge they have received.If not this wouldn't be achievable.
Furthermore, the advent of technology has made the future generations more relevant to society.To be more specific, they have provided profound solutions to a lot of problems that people had experienced in the past.For instance, in my village we had problem getting water as the only available source is to get to the stream.Nevertheless, this has been resolved since we now have liberated children that had really worked hard by giving back to their society.So now it is much easier to get water, because all houses have a tap running in front of their house.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe that youngsters have a greater impact on society.This is because they can easily change the bad situation of the country and because they have made social amenities accessible for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06705539359 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93905894325 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548104956268 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 20.1344086022 422% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 280.046759488 48.9658058833 572% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 434.5 100.406767564 433% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.75 20.6045352989 416% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.5 5.45110844103 633% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13352433066 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875701808773 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028614510522 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875701808773 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028614510522 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.3 11.7677419355 385% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.8 58.1214874552 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.4 10.1575268817 358% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.31 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.81 8.01818996416 147% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.0537634409 358% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 36.0 10.247311828 351% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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