Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities (not mine)
Over the past few years, the issue of whether or not young people put enough time aside for helping their communities has received a great deal of attention from psychologists and sociologists. Although some may say that young people are doing their best to develop their society; I as well as many others, believe that due to varied reasons such as being busy or lack of the sense of responsibility, adolescents are not active enough in their communities.
First of all, an important reason why young people are not helping their society very well is that they do not have enough time even for their regular tasks. Many experts point out that living in these days world is much more difficult than before, and it could be more sophisticated for juveniles because they are in the first steps of building their future life. Young people have to struggle with a lot of tasks and problems during their life. For example, some of them have to work beside their education, or as they are amateur in their jobs, have to spend more time on it in order to increase the possibility of their success in the future. Thus, most of the young people do not have any time for doing activities like helping the communities.
Another reason for this point of view is that people have a lower sense of responsibility for their society these days.
Communities are expanding at a high pace, and this development has made people more arrogant. People, especially young ones, are trying hard to build their own life, so they do not pay enough attention to their communities. However, they should know that helping their communities can also cause development in their individual life.
Finally, it is occasionally said that society does not try to participate young people in it. Most of the sociologists mention that politicians and leaders of the communities do not pay enough attention to the importance of young people. Subsequently, psychologists argue that due to this lack of attention, a large range of young people have become disappointed about their life or their role in their community. As a result, they will become more reluctant for helping the society, or they may also think that they are not helpful for the communities.
In conclusion, considering the ideas presented in paragraphs above, I personally believe that young people do not give enough time to help their communities chiefly due to the difficulties in their own life and rapid development of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Over the past few years, the issue of whether or not young people put enough time aside for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91885441527 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74146128168 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465393794749 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6976489243 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.8125 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1875 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45773887522 0.236089414692 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187186995159 0.076458572812 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103507505578 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289165689716 0.150856017488 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106139337504 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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