Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
In the modern era, the issue of whether or not young people do not allocate adequate time to helping for growing their societies has received a great deal of attention from psychologists and sociologist. Although some may say that teenagers contribute to the communication activities such as political and economic situations for improving their societies; I, as well as many others, believe that due to varied reasons such as being busy or lack of a sense of responsibility, adolescents are not active enough in their communities.
First of all, an important reason why young people do not spend sufficient time helping and improving their societies is that they must spend their time improving education. Many experts believe that human in adolescent age is responsible to spend adequate time and energy for studying their lessons. They should focus on the school works and assignments for learning in the best ways because if they do not learn their lessons deeply, they would face many problems at a higher level of educations. So, they have to study at their best and improving educational abilities.
Another reason for this point of view is that teenagers are not old enough for helping their societies. At any stage of life, a human must bring up one aspect of their personalities, and they had to attend to issues that relate to their age. In other words, young people would spend their time on activities that help them grow their personalities such as playing a proper game, doing some sports, and learning other languages. Furthermore, psychologists say that teenagers should not get involved in political or economic issues for having demerits effects on their personalities, and they do not enough old for knowing these problems and struggle with them.
Finally, it is occasionally said that that society does not try to participate young people in it. Most of the sociologists mention that politicians and leaders of the communities do not pay enough attention to the importance of young people. Subsequently, psychologists argue that due to this lack of attention, a large range of young people has become disappointed about their life or their role in their community. As a result, they will become more reluctant for helping the
society or they may also think that they are not helpful for the communities.
In conclusion, considering the ideas presented in the paragraphs above, I believe that teenagers do not give enough time to help their communities chiefly due to the difficulties in their own lives and the rapid development of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10900473934 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90056298844 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483412322275 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3951565072 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.733333333 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1333333333 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419041218927 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158174742832 0.076458572812 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09587467167 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239923433457 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958800367982 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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