Your government has announced that it wishes to build a military base near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the military base? Explain your position.
With increasing tensions between countries and military alliances (e.g. NATO), many countries are planning to build military bases on strategic area. There is also another reason to build such places. Governments, which are suppress their citizens, build such places to prevent probable revolutions. In general, these military bases have some advantages and some disadvantages.
First of all, military bases in areas that are strategically important are very beneficial. Presence of the military forces on these places can improve our country's security. When a country feels that it's borders are endanger by foreign forces, creating a military base in the best response to the enemies. For instance, the south east of Iran was very dangerous several years ago. Terrorists, which came from Pakistan and Afghanistan, killed a lot of innocent people because of religious beliefs. After many studies, in order to fight against terrorists, Iranian armies decided to build a military campus in that area. Now, that area is completely safe because many of the terrorists were died on through several ambushes conducted by military armies.
Second of all, building a military campus can make a lot noise and disturb people who are settle in that area. As military units need a lot of logistic needs, then, aircraft such as jets, helicopters as well as tanks, trucks, military cars will communicate many times that make a lot of noise. Furthermore, presence of military armies usually cause people to fear and feel that they are insecure. This sense is common in regimes with low democracy. Furthermore, because armies are far away from their home, they may do some crimes such as rape and sexual abuses; things that we have heard many times in media. So, military bases are not a perfect place to provide security.
Personally, I completely disagree with building military base in my community because I believe that military armies usually make people to feel insecure. People think that they are located here to suppress them and prevent them from demonstrating their objections to governments. Furthermore, we have police forces that are more adapted with urban areas and they can make us to feel secure.
In conclusion, making military base is not a good idea. There are a lot of other alternatives to maintain our country. In fact, most of the advanced countries use electronic equipment to control their borders. I think we should use more modern facilities winch employs less humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suppressed'.
Suggestion: suppressed
...ild such places. Governments, which are suppress their citizens, build such places to pr...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'endangered'.
Suggestion: endangered
...en a country feels that its borders are endanger by foreign forces, creating a military ...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...can make a lot noise and disturb people who are settle in that area. As military units ...
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Line 9, column 270, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun humans is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...se more modern facilities winch employs less humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, e.g., first, furthermore, may, second, so, then, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20149253731 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69072945488 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0011332769 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163835413035 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540824322141 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502980734843 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102053038489 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035978800752 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.