your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.
Human beings have long sought after happiness and well-being. As the world has been more complicated, a plenty of factors affect this. While some believe that happiness can be achieved through a good social life, I believe that it can be achieved through a fulfilling job because the job is a major part of adulthood and social life has tied with our relationship in the workplace.
To begin with, most people spend an enormous time on their job and the typical job takes at least eight hours a day. Therefore, if individuals are satisfied with their job, love what they do, and breathe in a happy workplace, this satisfaction, and pleasant feeling will spread through all over their lives. Moreover, a well-payed job provides them substantial income so they do not have to worry about financial issues. Take, for instance, a person who has a lucrative profession, loves his job and tries to step up in that environment. He starts his day enthusiastically and hopefully in comparison to another person who has to work in a basic job with a low-income dragging himself out of the bed every morning. It is obvious that the former have a happier life. Not only because he breathes in a happy air most of his time because he also can afford joyful entertainments and interesting travels adding his happiness.
Furthermore, it is true that social life has an undeniable impact on one’s well-being but it is not something apart from one’s professional life. An integral part of our social circle overlaps with our relationships is a workspace. During a day, one spends a great time with his colleagues. For example, one eats lunch five or six times with their peers at work, while he may only have food one time in a week with his friends. Consequently, one should try to have a healthy relationship with his coworkers in order to experience serenity and enter a happy zone. In contrast, having permanent conflicts in one’s workplace, a person will perceive the spread of its negative effects through his life. Considering these points, social relationships in one’s career can affect all over one’s life.
Thus, with the above in mind, professional life has a direct effect on one’s happiness since it is an integral part of life and social life has an obvious bond with relationships in the workplace.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in contrast, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94670050761 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92336100721 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532994923858 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9450089096 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.277777778 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2777777778 5.45110844103 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146134756057 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520855321126 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390471443658 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114623207661 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036380458639 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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