In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the question.
No one can deny that everyone has a different definition of success. Some measure it by their cognitive abilities, while others by putting a smile in someone’s face. However, If I were forced to choose, I would say that frankness is the most essential trait to secure success in life personally and professionally.
First and foremost, being trust-worthy would create, strength, and sustain our relationships with others. For instance, when I was a sophomore, I made friends with one of my colleagues and we remained friends for Five years. One day, we got into a fight and I asked her about a particular thing, unfortunately, she lied to my face and tried to twist the truth. As a result, I cut ties with her because the most important factor in our relationship has collapsed.
In addition, possessing a moral compass would aid us in maintaining an intact state of mind. Indeed, honesty is a vital factor to have inner peace. For example, I remember once, I lied to my professor about doing an assignment. To be honest, that night, I could not sleep because my conscious was eating me alive.; so, on the following day, I went to my professor’s office and admitted the truth. My teacher acknowledged my honesty and I learned my lesson that stretching the truth will only create an internal conflict. Consequently, saying the truth no matter what is key to self-peace.
Last but not least, saying the truth would enable our superiors in the workplace to trust us. To illustrate, my brother is a finical analyst, during his first year, he was not that efficient employee. But my brother got promoted after two years, the reason behind that is his integrity and accountability. For sure, my brother’s moral correctness assisted him in gaining his boss confidence. Therefore, if my brother had covered- up his mistakes work, he would have not gotten promotion.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that we all wish to make it in life, but the door for that is honesty. I believe this for virous reasons such as honesty is key to sustain our ties with others, maintain a peaceful life and thrive in our jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85164835165 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92507987231 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585164835165 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7859676815 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901350600959 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294084809843 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252008897081 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562626320894 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233178668982 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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