In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the question.
In some ways, life is a rewarding experience since we work hard to achieve our goals. In other ways, the obstacles that we undoubtedly face make it difficult for us to cope at times. Whether we are in good times or bad, certain qualities will help us to weather these storms successfully. Of course, no one can deny that everyone has a different definition of how to be successful during our lives. Indeed, some measure it by their cognitive abilities, while others gauge success by putting a smile on someone’s face. However, If I am forced to choose, I will say that honesty is the most essential trait to secure success in life personally, academically, and professionally.
First and foremost, being trust-worthy creates strength and sustains our relationships with others which in turn, will help us to successfully maintain ties, especially since such a trait is the pillar of relationships. For instance, when I was a sophomore, I made friends with one of my colleagues, and we became inseparable like two peas in a pod. One day, we got into a fight because I asked her about a particular thing. Unfortunately, she lied to my face and tried to twist the truth. Because I was not able to trust her anymore, eventually, I had cut ties with her. Hence, honesty is the most indispensable character to pave the way for us to become successful when it comes to nourishing relationships.
In addition, honesty can benefit us academically inasmuch as possessing a moral compass aids us in maintaining a stable healthy mind. Indeed, honesty is a vital factor to have inner peace. For example, I remember once that I lied to my professor about doing an assignment. To be honest, that night, I could not sleep because my conscience was eating me alive, so on the following day, I went to my professor’s office and admitted the truth. My teacher acknowledged my honesty, and I learned my lesson that stretching the truth would only create an internal conflict. Consequently, saying the truth in academic contexts is the key to self-peace and to become personally satisfied.
Last but not least, saying the truth will enable us to flourish in our professional endeavors. In fact, our superiors in the workplace can trust us more easily if we are honest with them. To illustrate, my brother is a finical analyst, and when he got his first job, he was not that efficient of an employee. However, my brother got promoted after two years because of his integrity and accountability. For sure, due to my brother’s moral correctness, his boss was able to trust him and believe in his potential. Therefore, if my brother had covered- up his mistakes, he would have not been promoted. Accordingly, uprightness is what will assist us to instill confidence in our superiors and co-workers which, in turn, will assist us in thriving professionally and in becoming occupationally successful.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that we all wish to make it in life, but the door for that is honesty. I believe this for various reasons such as honesty is key to sustain our ties with others, maintain a peaceful life and thrive in our jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2609.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86753731343 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05855855519 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 819.9 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9387998983 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6296296296 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8518518519 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2962962963 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955558562025 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289333128103 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277069929789 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618826798174 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216024336511 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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