46 TPO Integrated essay

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46 TPO Integrated essay

The passage demonstrates the advantages of electronic medical record system over the use of paper-based medical reports. The lecture, in contrast, explains that the advantages of electronic medical databases are uncertain, providing evident reasonings.

It’s true that keeping electronic records will reduce the overall cost caused by paper-based records. It will save the cost of copying, faxing or transporting reports from one location to another. Accordingly, the paper reports require much storage spaces while electronic records needs almost none. However, the lecture states that there will be no saving regarding electronic records because of legal restrictions and, in order to keep backups, paper records will still be in use. Consequently, it won’t benefit budget savings.

While the passage affirms that use of electronic records will prevent errors as legible computerised fonts and databases are used, the lecture contradicts this point by explaining how doctors still use pen and paper to make notes and prescriptions for the patients. Therefore, it is unavoidable to prevent errors on the databases because it is a staff member who has to interpret the illegible handwritings into the system anyway.

The lecturer says that the argument that electronic medical records will aid in the research purposes is completely vague. According to the lecture, there will be no benefits regarding researches because it will be difficult to get access to medical records. There have been strict privacy laws for privacy of the patients’ medical health. Therefore, one has to go through complicated procedures seeking permission from the doctor, hospital and patients as well. Most of the times, permission is not granted. Because of that, the third advantage of aiding research is ruled out.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, anyway, consequently, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, third, well, while, as to, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 276.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6268115942 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91316965622 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.2689611521 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.533333333 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507771296955 0.272083759551 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16261886111 0.0996497079465 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113830476107 0.0662205650399 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308937448303 0.162205337803 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673475894922 0.0443174109184 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.8541721854 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.2367328918 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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