4days work week and its benefit
Nowadays, mobile phones are common in our daily life. The impact of these small devices on human life is out of mind. From the invention of the internet and manifestation of cell phones, people use these technologies in their everyday life. In other words, almost all of our daily tasks such as buying online, text messaging, calling someone, and etc. depend on cell phones due to their accessibility and easy usage comparing to other devices such as laptops. On the other hand, cell phones cause a destructive addiction in people which is harmful and have negative effects on our social life. For instance, some people believe it is very annoying to use your personal cell phone while you are using public transportation services such as buses, trains, and airplanes.
To begin with, it is important to separate public life from private life. some activities such as blustering phone conversations are acceptable only in our private life. In fact, we should not use our cell phones in public places in order to call someone because our conversation during those calls may be annoying and disturbing for others. Besides, in some countries, it is a human rights abuse to have a loud phone conversation during using public transportation services.
The second reason is that by using the cell phone in public transportation services, our phone conversations are at the real risk of abusing by hackers or blackmailers. For instance, some vital personal information such as credit card number, ID card number and even a phone number which you give to another one during a phone conversation is at risk by some abusive persons.
To conclude, in my opinion, the prohibition of using the cell phone in public transportation system should become law by the order of governments all over the world because it is not only against human rights but also an insipient action due to the risk of abuse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...nline, text messaging, calling someone, and etc. depend on cell phones due to their acce...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...separate public life from private life. some activities such as blustering phone con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, second, so, while, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 318.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96540880503 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79112276387 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503144654088 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2159193809 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06452816374 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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