Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.
With emergence of the internet With emergence of the internet human beings life changes, we step forward in. modern life that is very unfamiliar to us and like any other big changes this one has a lot of advantages and disadvantages.
With internet, life become easier and satisfying like online shopping or food deliveries specially in modern life that people are very busy and tired.
internet become the most important part of humans life if they want to know about anything they will easily google it and learn a lot a about subject. but the internet is a very controversial invention because it changed people.
according to the last survey of new york times today's people read less books and newspaper and they just use social media for communication and in my opinion it is very dangerous specially for younger because they are internet-addicted and it would damage their brain human beings life changes, we step forward in. modern life that is very unfamiliar to us and like any other big changes this one has a lot of advantages and disadvantages.
With internet, life become easier and satisfying like online shopping or food deliveries specially in modern life that people are very busy and tired.
internet become the most important part of humans life if they want to know about anything they will easily google it and learn a lot a about subject. but the internet is a very controversial invention because it changed people.
according to the last survey of new york times today's people people " style="caret-color: rgb(51, 51, 51); color: rgb(51, 51, 51); white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size: 19.360000610351562px;">read less books and newspaper and they just use social media for communication and in my opinion it is very dangerous specially for younger because they are internet-addicted and it would damage their brain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
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Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 7.30242825607 301% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 307.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18892508143 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40158735109 2.5805825403 132% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.358306188925 0.540411800872 66% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.68575566 49.2860985944 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.818181818 110.228320801 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 21.698381199 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 7.06452816374 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 4.19205298013 501% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152972572762 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842101387176 0.0996497079465 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340241474804 0.0662205650399 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969618453795 0.162205337803 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043542504894 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.3589403974 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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