The altruism in animals and humans
The article talks about altruism in animals and humans, that there are one side sacrifices to help others without gain anything. While the professor refutes that by saying that the altruistic side always gains something worth for him much.
First, the reading gave two examples of that like the Meerkat in their eating habits, the sentinel one who guards the other when they hunting food to eat, he will alarm others when seeing any predators, the reading state that he did not eat with them, he helps without gain. The professor refutes that by saying that he is the first individual who eats, so he monitors them with a full stomach, this means that he gains more than them.
Second, the article states that the Meerkat who is sending the alarm to altering the other in a dangerous place as well as he will escape alone which makes the hunting him easier. However, the professor refutes that by saying the Sentinel is the first one who sees the predator so he will run first and the others in areal danger, also the attention of the predator will all be on them instead of the caller.
Third, the reading gave the second example of altruism, in the human case, when one person donates in his kidney to any relative or stranger without any gain, or with little benefits. The professor opposes this point by explaining that the dona-tor will receive appreciation and respect,which this reward worth and means to some.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...like the Meerkat in their eating habits, the sentinel one who guards the other wh...
^^
Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...or will receive appreciation and respect,which this reward worth and means to some.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, third, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70682730924 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24407809979 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5470078244 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 110.228320801 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.125 21.698381199 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780654863085 0.272083759551 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429376527479 0.0996497079465 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755067027632 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597756632466 0.162205337803 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602549942066 0.0443174109184 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.3589403974 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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