The article states that global warming is a phenomenon that become nowadays issues. It is something that causes rise of earthe’s temprature. It is because of using more and more of gases.The passage provides three reasons for it. The professor also says that rising that average temprature of the earth is a consequence that people have to deal with it. It changes in North America,the amunt of gases differenciate from 965 to 2005 in half centry.
First, the reading states that scientists by estimating the level of carbon dioxide in the air understand that increasing in earthe’s weather in the half of twenieth century is because of rising the amount of this gas in the air. The professor also agrees with it and claimd that , it is showed by decreasing the days with snows,of course in cold and snowy regions, he says that it decrease nine days in those regions.
Second the article says that average temprature of earth increase by 1.5 degree farenheight. The professor also says that weather station says this.
Third that passage states that changing in earthe’s pattern may cause a lot of disaster in the earth,for example big flood,or maybe drought in the other corner of the world,it may causes damage to many numerous species of plants and animals and…. . The professor also says about ski industry that effects a lot by increasing earhe’s temprature. Ski is a sport that needs snow,he says that snowy days decrease in many part of the world,so without snow we can’t have a ski region . It also effect the economy that worked by people that came for ski,for example restaurants and local hotels and…. .In addition this may decrease the tourims industry and in the end to the economy of the region.
The article states that global warming is a phenomenon that becomes nowadays issues. It is something that causes the rise of earth’s temperature. It is because of using more and more of gases.The passage provides three reasons for it. The professor also says that rising that average temperature of the earth is a consequence that people have to deal with it. It changes in North America, the number of gases differenciate from 965 to 2005 in half centry.
First, the reading states that scientists by estimating the level of carbon dioxide in the air understand that increasing in earthe’s weather in the half of twenieth century is because of rising the amount of this gas in the air. The professor also agrees with it and claimd that , it is showed by decreasing the days with snows,of course in cold and snowy regions, he says that it decrease nine days in those regions.
Second the article says that average temprature of earth increase by 1.5 degree farenheight. The professor also says that weather station says this.
Third that passage states that changing in earthe’s pattern may cause a lot of disaster in the earth,for example big flood,or maybe drought in the other corner of the world,it may causes damage to many numerous species of plants and animals and…. . The professor also says about ski industry that effects a lot by increasing earhe’s temprature. Ski is a sport that needs snow,he says that snowy days decrease in many part of the world,so without snow we can’t have a ski region . It also effect the economy that worked by people that came for ski,for example restaurants and local hotels and…. .In addition this may decrease the tourims industry and in the end to the economy of the region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, third, for example, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 295.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92881355932 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64923906747 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51186440678 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8963548299 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 4.19205298013 644% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362373393012 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132563993219 0.0996497079465 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157651063407 0.0662205650399 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223809575174 0.162205337803 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.229625476168 0.0443174109184 518% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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