asteroid colonization
The passage presents some presumed advantages of astreoid colonization compared to our Moon or Mars. The lecturer disregards all the points that are made in the article, and he claims that asteroid colonization is actually not practical. His further demonstrations are as follows.
First, although it is true that the low gravity condition makes landing and taking off easier for spacecrafts, it can have a serious negative effect on humans' health. A low gravity environment causes loss of muscle mass and bone density. Even astronats who spend few months in spaceships as low gravity settings face serious health issues as their muscle mass and bone density decreases. Thus, the low gravity of asteroids is potentially problematic for the colonies' health.
Second, while it may seem that mining valuable metals can cover the costs of asteroid colonization, it probably will not be the practical case in reality. Transferring colonies to asteroids and bringing mined metals to Earth can be rather expensive. Additionally, the profit made by selling those metals may not stay as high as today, since there will be a great increase in the supply. The high prices of these metals, like gold and platinum, are the result of their scarcity on Earth. Therefore, asteroid colonization can be very costly whithout an adequate source to make up for the loss.
Third, asteroids get close to the Earth on their orbits, however, they often travel in unusual paths. While it may be easy to get to an asteroid, the return from the asteroid can be extensively difficult since they may travel long distances from earth, much farther than the distance between Earth and a planet like Mars.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...t can have a serious negative effect on humans health. A low gravity environment cause...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'colonies'' or 'coloni's', 'colony's'?
Suggestion: colonies'; coloni's; colony's
...oids is potentially problematic for the colonies health. Second, while it may seem th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, thus, while, as to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 276.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09420289855 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71288515269 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3085748214 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276727050444 0.272083759551 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937140475317 0.0996497079465 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976691490526 0.0662205650399 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170307093916 0.162205337803 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900396971196 0.0443174109184 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...t can have a serious negative effect on humans health. A low gravity environment cause...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'colonies'' or 'coloni's', 'colony's'?
Suggestion: colonies'; coloni's; colony's
...oids is potentially problematic for the colonies health. Second, while it may seem th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, thus, while, as to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 276.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09420289855 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71288515269 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3085748214 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276727050444 0.272083759551 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937140475317 0.0996497079465 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976691490526 0.0662205650399 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170307093916 0.162205337803 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900396971196 0.0443174109184 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.