Big problems in breeding dog industry
In an overview, in this speech and reading discussed about big problem in dog industry and drawbacks and benefits of it. Deliberately, the essential indications in the lecture cast doubt on the fundamental points in the reading.
First of all, the lecture states that the too many dog breeders are lack in both an understandin science an sense of ethics. So, they are unqualified and just generate dogs for profit in backyard and dont mind to dog welfare. However, this is contrasts the topic in reading that the asserts that the breeders love dogs and contribute to their welfare.
Furthermore, about to delve breed purity, the lecture declares that the firmly focus on breed purity leads to inbreeding and genetics disorder such as hip and bone problems, heart condition, deafness and so on. Also
lecture criticizes of the role of breed registries in promoting breed purity. Although, this is opposite with clues of the reading that clearly indicates dog breeders use genetics beneficially and claim favorably of breed registries.
Finally, the lecture concluded that the culture of dog breeding is responsible for proliferation of puppy population that produce an overpopulation of dogs, causing to more unwanted dogs. While, this challenges the content in the text that the promotion of dog breeds encourages responsible dog ownership.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
...re lack in both an understandin science an sense of ethics. So, they are unqualifi...
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...enerate dogs for profit in backyard and dont mind to dog welfare. However, this is c...
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Suggestion:
...bone problems, heart condition, deafness and so on. Also lecture criticizes of ...
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... condition, deafness and so on. Also lecture criticizes of the role of breed registr...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of dogs, causing to more unwanted dogs. While, this challenges the content in the tex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 215.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34418604651 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88599310334 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7094152699 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.9 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368388278895 0.272083759551 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131386235639 0.0996497079465 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888879900498 0.0662205650399 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177930271804 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564581035141 0.0443174109184 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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