cell phone while driving
The reading passage argues that cell phones are a major cause of car accidents. The speaker, on the other hand, believes there are other prominent factors for accidents and cell phones are of great help sometimes.
The author explains that using a cell phone while driving is a leading distracting factor which can result in accidents. consequently, different laws have been set to prohibit drivers from using cell phones in order to improve safety.
The lecturer, however, argues that cell phones can be of great benefit for drivers. she claims that based on an experiment, other factors, such as eating food, talking to passengers, putting makeups, and using the navigation system are more distracting and more probably will lead to an accident. furthermore, she discusses that cell phones are a vital tool to inform problems on the road, emergencies, etc. So, drivers can call for help any time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll phones are of great help sometimes. The author explains that using a cell phone...
^^^
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...g factor which can result in accidents. consequently, different laws have been set to prohib...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...es can be of great benefit for drivers. she claims that based on an experiment, oth...
^^^
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...more probably will lead to an accident. furthermore, she discusses that cell phones are a v...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 22.412803532 31% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 1373.03311258 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 148.0 270.72406181 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08783783784 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.04702891845 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61551077992 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 145.348785872 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 419.366225166 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.120689458 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.125 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06452816374 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37387396175 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160372688682 0.0996497079465 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120909543314 0.0662205650399 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255322071 0.162205337803 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101548738372 0.0443174109184 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 63.6247240618 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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