comics
The audio clip and the Reading are both about the comics medium, the author of the text said that the history of the comics is based on Americans because they have made all the important steps on the topic, on the other hand, the audio clip doesn’t agree with the text, because the man said that the Americans are important on the comic medium, but this invention do not belongs to them, because it belongs to the whole world.
First of all, the author of the text points that the first comic was Hogan`s Alley, and the writer of this comic was American, just like the publisher and all the people who were involved on the comic. Also, he said that the first super hero, who was Spiderman, is American too, and this was an example for the Europeans and the whole world. Besides, this art form inspired the Japanese with mangas. That’s why this author states that the comics are an American art form.
On the other hand, the man on the audio clip notes that the firs comic was about an inmigrant, and actually that one wasn’t the first comic, because this one belongs to Europeans. Besides, he said that one of the most important comic characters is superman, and it was from Canada. That’s why he states that the comics belongs to the whole world not only to Americans.
Finally, the author of the paragraph states that the comics are an American art form, and on the other hand, the man on the audio clip states that comics are an art form that belongs to the whole world not only to Americans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'belong'?
Suggestion: belong
...comic medium, but this invention do not belongs to them, because it belongs to the whol...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60727272727 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22108900399 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.374545454545 0.540411800872 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.550039664 49.2860985944 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.777777778 110.228320801 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 21.698381199 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378702310555 0.272083759551 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203936064555 0.0996497079465 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117789427972 0.0662205650399 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281997815969 0.162205337803 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044295865484 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.7273730684 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.2008830022 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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