comics are a uniquely American art form

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comics are a uniquely American art form.

The reading and the lecture are both about comics are a uniquely American art form. While the author of article argues that, comics are a uniquely American art form, the lecturer disputes the claim mentioned in the article. His position is that comics are not a uniquely American art form.
According to the reading, the first popular commercially successful comic strip was Hogan’s Alley. This Strip and its character were American in every aspect and also it was drawn and written by an American cartoonist. The specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that Hogan’s Alley was not the first successful comic strip, infect there were many other famous comic strips before and these were from Europe, and Britain
Secondly, the author mention in the reading that, the character in the strip was American in every aspect. The first famous comic book in the world was from America. He goes on to say that, Americans invented the comic strips, and Americans have exported their unique art form to the rest of the world. Even the Japanese comic, called manga, was inspired by American comics. The lecturer, however, asserts that comics are not a uniquely American art form. He claims that the character of Hogan’s Alley comics was an immigrant from hungry. 16 years before the release of action comics in America, Tin-tan was the action comic most popular in Belgium. He also mentioned that American Disney comics were created by Americans, whereas the Europe Disney comics were Created by Europeans.
Finally, the author puts forth the idea that comics are a uniquely American art form. In contrast, the lecturer’s stance is comics are not a uniquely American art form.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... comic strips before and these were from Europe, and Britain Secondly, the autho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03914590747 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39287790482 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451957295374 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7442252213 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.636868684866 0.272083759551 234% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.323454161772 0.0996497079465 325% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.260618039507 0.0662205650399 394% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.530570875247 0.162205337803 327% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.250414242009 0.0443174109184 565% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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