The reading and the lecture are both about a 200 million-year old fossil that resembles like bees’ nest resulting to existence of bees long time ago. The author of the reading feels that this is not a fossil of bee’s house. The lecture challenges the claims made by the author. She is of the opinion that bees existed in the past.
To begin with, the author argues that the earliest preserved body of the bee is 100-million years old. However, the fossil was found 200-millions ago. So they are not matched. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. She says 200-millions year ago, the trees that provides preservation of fossils were very rare. Hence, they couldn’t preserve that time.
Secondly, the writer suggests that 200-million years ago, There were no flowering plants, thus, this means the bees can’t live. Because the bees can’t exist without flowers. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that they can live in that environment. He elaborates on this by bringing up the point that there are fern or non flowering plants. Therefore, the bees can exist that environment.
Finally, the author posits that the fossil they found is not detailed or lacks evidence. They don’t have spiral caps which modern bees have now. In contrast, the lecturer’s position is they don’t have spiral caps is right, but they have same chemical that can make special water proof chambers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is is not a fossil of bee's house. The lecture challenges the claims made by t...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have spiral caps is right, but they have same chemical that can make special wate...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: waterproof
...ve same chemical that can make special water proof chambers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 235.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17872340426 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70470307825 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570212765957 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7112567928 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6111111111 110.228320801 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0555555556 21.698381199 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324339393752 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110840777216 0.0996497079465 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113761362182 0.0662205650399 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21373794394 0.162205337803 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103566343013 0.0443174109184 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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