Dinosaurs
There are lots of kinds of animals there in the world, and most of the animals are endotherms. However, there is a very arguable animal that we doesn’t know whether it is an endotherm which is called dinosaur. The passage shows three points to show that dinosaurs are endotherms, but the professor disagrees with the passage.
First of all, the professor thinks that the position of the fossil of the dinosaurs can’t prove they are endotherms. In the time which dinosaurs live, those regions are much warmer than today, and it is fit for not endotherms to live. And when the polar region is cold, they may migrate to a warmer place or hibernate.
Secondly, the professor thinks the position of the leg can’t prove the dinosaurs are endotherms too. The structure of the dinosaurs not only means that they are endotherms but there is also another explanation, which is t support more weight. And this can benefit the dinosaurs, it can help dinosaurs to grow larger. So this can’t prove that dinosaurs are endotherms.
Thirdly, the professor shows that dinosaurs contain Haversian canals which the endotherms contain still can’t prove they are endotherms. Although they contain the Haversian canal, they still have growth rings. The growth ring is the thickening of the bones during the periods in which they stop rapidly growing. This can prove dinosaurs stop growing rapidly during the polar period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[3]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'don’t'
Suggestion: don’t
...there is a very arguable animal that we doesn’t know whether it is an endotherm which i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06837606838 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51999093234 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482905982906 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7202374065 49.2860985944 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346922687579 0.272083759551 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154512344353 0.0996497079465 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101888018455 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239914114957 0.162205337803 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782671111516 0.0443174109184 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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