dinosaurs
Dinosaurs, are commonly known, or more likely, predicted to be, cold-blooded animal. However, the reading thinks that they had been endotherms. The lecture refuted each and every point that the reading said.
The first thing that the reading claims is that there were dinosaurs that lived in the polar region, so they must had been endotherms. The lecture refutes the point by suggesting that the polar was warmer at some time of the year. It was said that the polar region was some time cold and some time warm during that time, so the dinosaurs might had migrated during the year.
The second point that the reading mentions is that the leg position are for endotherms, the lecture, again, points out the flaw. These creatures surely had their leg under their body, however, it doesn’t means that they are endotherms. Dinosaurs are large, and the more commonly accepted explanation for this structure is that is was used to support weight.
The lecture finally make the last are argument that the Haversian canals also might not matter much, which makes the last straw that breaks the reading’s back. By judging on the fossil’s growth rings, the lecture comes to the conclusion that even though most dinosaurs never had Haversian canals, their growth rings signature that they didn’t grow all the year like an endotherms, but more like a cold-blooded animal.
All in all, the lecture is right and the dinosaurs are, as we all believed, not endotherms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gion, so they must had been endotherms. The lecture refutes the point by suggesting...
^^^
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'doesn't' requires base form of this verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...g under their body, however, it doesn’t means that they are endotherms. Dinosaurs are...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... explanation for this structure is that is was used to support weight. The lectur...
^^
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...planation for this structure is that is was used to support weight. The lecture fi...
^^^
Line 4, column 366, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an endotherm' or simply 'endotherms'?
Suggestion: an endotherm; endotherms
...that they didn’t grow all the year like an endotherms, but more like a cold-blooded animal. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9674796748 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38958013017 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532520325203 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8836840121 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06452816374 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177953573439 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679048972507 0.0996497079465 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831757343683 0.0662205650399 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105191805735 0.162205337803 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621565751307 0.0443174109184 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.