It is crystal clear that the human lifestyle has been changed a lot during the last decades, especially after the industrial revolution in Europe. Although some people believe that these changes have a negative effect on their life satisfaction rate, I totally object with the statement due to several conspicuous reasons which will be elaborated as follows.
Firstly, the development of technology enhances our convenient in various conditions. Nowadays, we can simultaneously manage a lot of different tasks. Also, handling these tasks is much easier than before, as the existence of different types of electronic devices in each ordinary home reveals it. We can see the applicability of a dishwasher, launderette and vacuum cleaner in our routine life, which directly decreases the time occupation in comparison of past. Moreover, developing medical equipment has a significant impact on the quality of life, as such, the rate of missing patient decreases considerably. Noteworthy, people were easily died, for physicians did not have the required technology to save the patients, therefore, even a simple illness caused irreparable loss to the patient.
Moreover, with this changes, a considerable growth has been made in communications and social equipment, which has a positive influence on people desirability. People can quickly have a connection with their acquaintances via social developments. For instance, we can have a voice call or even video call with various applications, such as WhatsApp and Skype, to connect with our friends and relatives. Furthermore, individuals can easily follow the news and realize the real one instead of the fake information. It is noteworthy to mention that most individuals believed rumors in the past.
Finally, people can travel to each part of the world without difficulty. In past, people used to travel by horses and ships, which none of them were safer and faster than modern equipment. Today, people can travel by plane, cars and modern ships which not only save their time with fast access to the destination but also protect them from the dangers of bandits and drowning. My grandmother’s memory is an example to prove my viewpoint. She forced to leave her hometown for 2 years with different challenges such as illness and loss. Thanks to planes inventors, we can easily travel everywhere, with a maximum in 5 or 6 days.
In conclusion, expanding changes in human lives makes many individuals think about the satisfaction rate of their life that whether it is better than before or not. I strongly believe that we live in much better condition than our ancestors, and support my idea via the aforementioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... loss to the patient. Moreover, with this changes, a considerable growth has been...
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Line 8, column 74, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...h part of the world without difficulty. In past, people used to travel by horses and sh...
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Line 8, column 455, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leaving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: leaving
...ample to prove my viewpoint. She forced to leave her hometown for 2 years with different...
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Line 8, column 551, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'plane'.
Suggestion: plane
...ges such as illness and loss. Thanks to planes inventors, we can easily travel everywh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 30.3222958057 195% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.01324503311 339% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2266.0 1373.03311258 165% => OK
No of words: 428.0 270.72406181 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29439252336 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03705605715 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 145.348785872 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579439252336 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 419.366225166 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0816868986 49.2860985944 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.904761905 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.380952381 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219667311009 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602092565114 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484744444788 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119523962114 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444606453321 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 63.6247240618 204% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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