Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country.
Learning and knowledge is an important matter for students, professors, workers and other different groups of the society. One the most popular knowledeges among the mentioned groups is gaining information about other countries. Nowadays, there are several means of information sources. The opinion are divided as to whether magazines and newspapers are the best source of getting information about other countries or another relibale sources must be used. When it comes to me, it is my firm conviction that we need another way to obtain the information about a foreign nation. To support my idea, there are several reasons, two of which are going to be aptly explored in the following.
First and foremost, newspapers and magazines have different tendencies and we cannot trust them. The basic rule for a media is truthfulness but regrettfully, Nowdays, massmedia has deviated from its main duty, which is enlightening of humans. For example, newspapers elaborate some insignificant negative features of country or even in some cases they fabricate some unbelievable stories about other nations in order to gain their own profit. As a result, we should depend ourselves on other reliable sources, especially when we are investigating about other countries.
The second reason coming to mind is rooted in the fact that even if we consider that newspapers and magazines are unbiased, their information are really limited. They just write about some general features of a country or a nation. For instance, the newspapers devote a small column to write something about the current situation of a specific country. However, the most significant part of a nation or a foreign region is their culture and their their history which are presented in the books or reliable websites.
In brief, I believe magazines and newspapers are not the best ways for gaining our required information about other nation. Since, not only magazines and newspapers are really biased and subjective these days but also they elaborate some specific details or even fabricate some parts of their information according to their own profit. Furthermore, their informations are limited.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'several means'.
Suggestion: several means
...ut other countries. Nowadays, there are several means of information sources. The opinion are...
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Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...mation sources. The opinion are divided as to whether magazines and newspapers are the best s...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
...e cannot trust them. The basic rule for a media is truthfulness but regrettfully, Nowda...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: their
...r a foreign region is their culture and their their history which are presented in the book...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, in brief, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 7.30242825607 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 342.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32456140351 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86926593062 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523391812865 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 419.366225166 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5761274885 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.117647059 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172801382627 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596352099941 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557168351579 0.0662205650399 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115015384985 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242862569958 0.0443174109184 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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