Driveless cars
The reading and the lecture are both about driveless cars. The author of the article feels that
is a huge improvement in society having this car.The lecture disputes
the claims made in the article. His position is that it won't bring any beneffits.
According to the reading driveless cars can be driven without a human through sensors computers,the article
mentions that it can be more efficient.This argument is challenged by the
lecturer,he states that the car uses computer softwares done by human. Additionally he points out
that there's no prove if is safe or not to use a program made it by human casting doubt how safe it is.
Secondly, The author suggests that the cars can reduce polution and contribute to the environment.In the article it is
said that the car can comunicate with other vehicles managing to decrease traffic and pollution due to the overuse of cars
on the rodes.The lecturer,however says that driveless cars won't require
a drivers license,resulting on more people on the rodes in addition to no age
restriction required to have the car.
Finally,the author points that passengers wil have an extra time to watch movies,read
and do some extra activities while the cars is driving itself.In contrast,the lecturer stance,
is that most people will have a distraction from their routine,resulting on a great amount of
people wasting their time.
In conclusion driveless cars have pros and cons,it is critically important that the costumers can
educate themselves about the beneffits and disadvantage of buying this specific type of car.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... improvement in society having this car.The lecture disputes the claims made in th...
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... improvement in society having this car.The lecture disputes the claims made in th...
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...ithout a human through sensors computers,the article mentions that it can be more e...
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... mentions that it can be more efficient.This argument is challenged by the lectur...
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...tions that it can be more efficient.This argument is challenged by the lecturer...
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...ient.This argument is challenged by the lecturer,he states that the car uses com...
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...human. Additionally he points out that theres no prove if is safe or not to use a pro...
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...ution and contribute to the environment.In the article it is said that the car c...
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... to the environment.In the article it is said that the car can comunicate with ot...
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...and pollution due to the overuse of cars on the rodes.The lecturer,however says t...
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...e to the overuse of cars on the rodes.The lecturer,however says that driveless ca...
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...ess cars wont require a drivers license,resulting on more people on the rodes in addition...
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...ction required to have the car. Finally,the author points that passengers wil have ...
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...y,the author points that passengers wil have an extra time to watch movies,read and...
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...vities while the cars is driving itself.In contrast,the lecturer stance, is that ...
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...lusion driveless cars have pros and cons,it is critically important that the costum...
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...tically important that the costumers can educate themselves about the beneffits a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 255.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22745098039 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07407960175 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.695698274 49.2860985944 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.625 110.228320801 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 21.698381199 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.875 7.06452816374 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.09492273731 440% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392675632932 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165393026526 0.0996497079465 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140879584946 0.0662205650399 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120841230589 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115948486186 0.0443174109184 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.3589403974 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.0289183223 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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