In an effort to encourage ecologically sustainable forestry practices, an international organization started issuing certifications to wood companies that meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recycling materials. Companies that rece

In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses the method of enhancing the ecollogical part in producing wood and provides three reasons of the fact that unlikely the foreign organisations the companies from United States do not want to receive an ecological certificate. However, the listening passage refutes these ideas by providing some more compelling points.

First, the reading passage claims that the Americans do not believe an ad and thus, do not take the mention of company’s certification in attention. The listening passage challenges this opinion by saying that the Americans are able to see the difference between valuable and unvaluable advertisment and they frequently can mark whether the product is ecocertified or not.

Second, the author posits that the price is very important for the Americans and they likely will not waste more money buying ecologically certified products. In contrast to the author, the professor confirms that for the Americans the more important factor is the quality of the product rather than its price. He says that if the difference between certified and uncertified products is in 5%, they will probably take the certified one, cause they can really understand the value of saving nature.

Third, the article says that the American certified companies will only succeed abroad. However, the lector brings up the idea that the better conditions for American organisations to sell their products is in the United States because of the competition abroad, which is higher than inside their home country.

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and provides three reasons of the fact that unlikely the foreign organisations the companies from United States do not want to receive an ecological certificate.
and provides three reasons of the fact that unlikely the foreign organizations, the companies from United States do not want to receive an ecological certificate.

and they frequently can mark
and they can frequently mark

and they likely will not waste
and they will not likely waste

Sentence: In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses the method of enhancing the ecollogical part in producing wood and provides three reasons of the fact that unlikely the foreign organisations the companies from United States do not want to receive an ecological certificate.
Error: ecollogical Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: The listening passage challenges this opinion by saying that the Americans are able to see the difference between valuable and unvaluable advertisment and they frequently can mark whether the product is ecocertified or not.
Error: unvaluable Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: advertisment Suggestion: advertisement
Error: ecocertified Suggestion: certified

Sentence: He says that if the difference between certified and uncertified products is in 5, they will probably take the certified one, cause they can really understand the value of saving nature.
Error: uncertified Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: However, the lector brings up the idea that the better conditions for American organisations to sell their products is in the United States because of the competition abroad, which is higher than inside their home country.
Error: organisations Suggestion: organizations

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 9 12
No. of Words: 247 250
No. of Characters: 1289 1200
No. of Different Words: 137 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.964 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.219 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.744 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.628 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.69 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4