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Why do people travel? Give reasons
Travelling across the time zone serves as hobby for myriad number of people these days. Indeed, some people like to travel for recovering from work, some travel to quench thirst of acquiring knowledge, while others travel for work purpose. I would like to throw light on these reasons in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, most individuals in this complex demanding world are absorbed in the hustle and bustle of hectic tedious daily schedule. In order to unwind their brain from monotonous life, people prefer to travel to different places for vacation and to spend leisure time with family. For instance, my brother is physician by occupation, so he hardly spares time during her ten hours daily shift. To prevent overexertion, he takes long vacation once in three months. Moreover, vacation trip aids him to concentrate on his work better when he returns back. This applies to most people, even psychologist suggests to take break to prevent depression and other mental disorders.
Secondly, outside the country live expatriates move to different countries to pursue higher studies. In fact, number of foreign students is exponentially increasing every year due to improved quality of education and preferred future benefits. My own experience is compelling example of this. When I finished my Physical Therapy Program I was searching for reputed college to continue my further studies. To my surprise, I discovered that to obtain degree in United States comes with tremendous positive outcomes. As a result, I am fortunate today to have a stable career and further options to expand my horizon of knowledge.
Thirdly, discrepancies in economy of different countries are predominant factor responsible for people migrating to obtain jobs. Everyone knows that Bangladesh being the poorest country in the whole world has fewer employment opportunities for their residents. Indeed, many people struggle hard to make living and they are mainly hand to mouth. Moreover, to avoid saturation and fierce competition, many citizens like to travel different countries such as Canada, United States of America or Middle East countries to make their ends meet. Thus, travelling to developed countries serves boon in time s of economic crisis.
To recapitulate, it is worth saying that travelling to different places serves multiple purposes such as leisure time, to enhance knowledge and to acquire decent paying jobs.
Lecture and reading discusses about substituting internal combustion engine with hydrogen based fuel cell engine. Reading talks about positive outcomes of using hydrogen based cell, while prefecture states that benefits of hydrogen based cell over internal combustion engine in reading are not logical.
First, reading states that petroleum is non-renewable source of energy, so in near future petroleum can no longer reproduced. Reading adds that hydrogen is easily available in the atmosphere in infinite quantity. Lecture casts doubt on this statement. She thinks that indeed hydrogen is always available in water, but can’t be used without processing. She thinks production of liquid hydrogen is very complicated and expensive process.
Second, reading points out that combustion of petroleum may contaminate environment. Furthermore, hydrogen based cell do not produce carbon dioxde. In contrast, lecture says that the process to obtain hydrogen in liquid form necessitates burning of coal and oil. She states that hydrogen cell might not reduce pollution because the factories to convert hydrogen emit smoke and harmful gases.
Third, reading implies that switching to hydrogen cell is cheaper option over internal combustion engine, as hydrogen cell is very efficient in producing energy. On contrary, lecture points out that platinum is used to form liquid hydrogen and its very expensive. However, other cheaper material failed to produce hydrogen. As a result she thinks that it is not economically feasible option. She successfully casts doubt on statements made in reading.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, for instance, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 22.412803532 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 97.0 30.3222958057 320% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 5.01324503311 399% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3518.0 1373.03311258 256% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 630.0 270.72406181 233% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58412698413 5.08290768461 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00997013923 4.04702891845 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76557865483 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 354.0 145.348785872 244% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 1081.8 419.366225166 258% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 2.5761589404 388% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 39.0 13.0662251656 298% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0792279141 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2051282051 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.09492273731 269% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 4.33554083885 392% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.27373068433 351% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 197.0 63.6247240618 310% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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