If you want to choose to travel to one of two places that you have in mind, which of the following two ways do you prefer?
-Finding information online about the two places
-Asking friends who have been to the two places
There are times when it really gets hard to choose one place to travel, especially when one has some limitations in time and budget. To make the most of vacations, many would rather refer to their friends, who have travel experiences of those places. However, others prefer to obtain their required information from the net. I personally subscribe to the view that the internet is more suitable in such circumstances. I hold this opinion for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the internet provides people with a wide range of information, which gives them the sight they require to make a well- informed decision. There are some websites on the net, which have built platforms for people to share their stories, photos, videos of places they have been to. People can also write about their experiences and then rate places by some points. For instance, some websites like tripadvisor.com, virtualtourist.com, which are pretty organized and have an easy interface that everyone can easily find any required information about any place. Accordingly, we can benefit from experiences of hundreds of million people by a quick look at the scores or read some short summaries instead of asking friends, which will give us a limit sight of the travel destinations since they might not have considered some aspects.
Secondly, the net oftentimes offers updated information with the most recent changes, while our friends might not have been to those places recently. For instance, the climate change or weather conditions, changing the visa policies for some places, to name but a handful. For instance, a couple of months ago, my parents decided to go to Turkey for holiday. The travel agent booked an expensive hotel in the downtown of Istanbul, and everything seemed okay. However, with a quick brows on the internet, according to one’s experience, we found out that despite the high quality of the service, there was a construction site near the hotel that produce so many noises. Fortunately, at that time we were able to cancel the room with the full refund, which would never have happened, if we had not searched for it on the internet.
To put it in a nutshell, considering the aforementioned points, I firmly believe that online searching about the travel destinations is more beneficial since not only does the net offer a wide range of information about the places through some websites, but it also informs people about the latest changes that have occurred recently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the vacations') or simply say ''most vacations''.
Suggestion: most of the vacations; most vacations
...tations in time and budget. To make the most of vacations, many would rather refer to their frien...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...which gives them the sight they require to make a well- informed decision. There are so...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'brow'?
Suggestion: brow
...hing seemed okay. However, with a quick brows on the internet, according to one'...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 30.3222958057 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1373.03311258 154% => OK
No of words: 419.0 270.72406181 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04534606205 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77172061453 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 145.348785872 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558472553699 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 419.366225166 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2643998994 49.2860985944 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.352941176 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6470588235 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238506689054 0.272083759551 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708617591884 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553013556802 0.0662205650399 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147202200082 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423165237857 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 63.6247240618 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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