integrated essay tpo19
Even though maney sociolists and most of the people argue as if it is ageneral truth that people need to follow the one sources of news and event, i firmlly recommend that in the complex world and various sources of information, people have to get information from several sources. to be more sure of the true or false of information and also for complicating and get more details of information people have to gain their information of many sources. And belive it or not, a person need to achiave verity of information of several sources. I will elaborate my idea with the significant reasons in the following prographs.
One of the meaningful reasons coming to my mind at first is that todays with inhancing to different sources of neas and event, people should search and seek about information that they obtian is real or not. As a matter of fact, when there are maney sources of information, people can not distingoush which of them is true. As an example, i have never understood which of the TV' news are more real that happen in our country, for this reaon i used to check another source to increasing my information to b well-informed.
Another my remarkable reason is that if people wants to witness the elaborated and complicated information, they hsould track and discover a more soureces of events. For instance, when i decided to select my thesis in university, i found that some journals were more sofisticated and some of them explained my topice entirly, thus i searched a lot of articls and website to get well-informed.
As a result, when people want to be more expert of some news and events and have real information, they have to choose many sourecs. as i am a student i try improve my knowlwdge of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, well, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 303.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72607260726 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83852174918 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498349834983 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.25165562914 639% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0628174744 49.2860985944 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.181818182 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 21.698381199 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160111225799 0.272083759551 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662179570275 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045667339171 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109360956478 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300411344234 0.0443174109184 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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