integrated task
The main idea of both the passage and the lecture is about whether humpback whales use stars for navigation or not. Considering this, the author provides three reasons to prove this theory. The professor, on the other hand, categorically denies whatever mentioned in reading through citing several reasons.
First, both the passage and the lecture talk about Intelligence of humpback whales. According to the passage, humpback whales seem to be intelligent enough to utilize stars for navigation. The lecture, nevertheless, rejects the author's view and illustrates the idea that intelligence does not have any connection with the ability to use stars. For example, although some bird species and dogs use stars for navigation, they have average intelligence. Therefore, using stars for navigation is not a sign of intelligence.
Second of all, both the author and the professor discuss humpback whales migrate in a straight line. The passage goes on to mention that humpback whales use stars to keep their migration path in a straight line. Nonetheless, the lecturer supports a contradictory view as compared to that presented in the reading; she describes that humpback whales stay in a straight line during the migration by some external objects or forces but this external force is not stars. Humpback whales can sense the magnetic field because of the existence of a special organism in their brain. Thus, the magnetic field is the main reason for this straight line, not stars.
Eventually, the reading and the lecture both discuss unusual behavior that humpback whales show. The author of the reading passage states that humpback whales do spy-hopping to watch the position of stars in the sky. However, the speaker refutes it, saying that sharks perform this behavior too but this animal does not migrate and do this behavior for finding prey. Moreover, she asserts that sometimes humpback whales do spy-hopping in the morning and in this time stars are not visible in the sky.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The main idea of both the passage and th...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eading through citing several reasons. First, both the passage and the lecture ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igation is not a sign of intelligence. Second of all, both the author and the p...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...son for this straight line, not stars. Eventually, the reading and the lecture ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 321.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19937694704 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6780697759 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485981308411 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7105697192 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1764705882 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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