The passage claims that elephants are one of the most captivating creatures on Earth, and the passage states several beliefs about surprising elephant behaviors. However, the professor says that there is misleading about the elephant behaviors, and she refutes each of the passage belief.
Firstly, the professor states that elephants know that they are nearing to the end of their life, and they demonstrate this awarness by breaking away from their herds and going off to certain location near water. However, the professor claims that when elephants became old, chewing process by their teeth become so hard so old elephants tend to vegetation to eat, and the vegetation area are near water. That's why, it is just an assuming that elephants break away from their herd because they are aware of approaching die.
Secondly, the passage states that elephants seem to have artistic ability because they can be taught to hold a paintbrush. However, the professor says that elephants ear are so sensitive so it is easy to train elephants the painting tricks, and that encouraged by teaching. Therefore, elephants do not have artistic ability. They are trained to do the required artist.
Thirdly, the passage states that elephants have a fear of mice as they back away from mice. However, the professor claims that it is not about elephants fearing of mice. It is just elephants are not familiar to them by their natural instinct because elephants live in forests or cages and not react to mice. That's why; elephants have not a fear of mice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...and the vegetation area are near water. Thats why, it is just an assuming that elepha...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elephants'' or 'elephant's'?
Suggestion: elephants'; elephant's
...brush. However, the professor says that elephants ear are so sensitive so it is easy to t...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...forests or cages and not react to mice. Thats why; elephants have not a fear of mice....
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...why; elephants have not a fear of mice. .
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y; elephants have not a fear of mice. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 257.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02723735409 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53166948862 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486381322957 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2256143372 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0308309366176 0.272083759551 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0160292837108 0.0996497079465 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216244787928 0.0662205650399 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0206725132427 0.162205337803 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157987969598 0.0443174109184 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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