Although satellite invention has made a great change to our world as it made the world a small village, but unfortunately, after decades some negative effects revealed such as addiction to television and time wasting.
Some people agree that movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. However, others disagree with this statement. In my opinion, I think the positive effects of movies and televisions outweigh the negative effects. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, people can access to all countries life through the televisions so televisions and movies have helped people to be cultured and educated. For instance, when I was ten years old, my favorite channel was national geographic. I gained a lot of knowledge about the animal life, other countries habits, and the world wars. I remember, when I was at the history class, I was the only one who had the answers to the hard questions about the world war because of watching this channel on the weekends. Also because I prefer visualization in learning, the television was a perfect way to me to absorb information easily. Therefore, Televisions have an essential role for people learning and acknowledgement.
Secondly, the televisions and movies are source of interesting especially in the last century before the internet invention. For instance, when I was child, all my family and extended family gathered every month to watch comedy movies. I was waiting this day of the month with passion. So televisions and movies are the cheapest way to interest people.
To sum up, although the debate the pros and cons of the televisions and movies are controversial, I strongly believe that Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... First of all, people can access to all countries life through the televisions so televis...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he world wars. I remember, when I was at the history class, I was the only one wh...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... watching this channel on the weekends. Also because I prefer visualization in learn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08116883117 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8307573721 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6718915369 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368561821077 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125641211256 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154099871783 0.0737576698707 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235861047607 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182288314418 0.0645574589148 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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