Jane Austen
The author claims that teenage girl of a portrait is Jane Austen and brings three reasons for supporting that. In contrats, the professor explains that the girl is a distant neace of Austen and refutes every reason of the author.
First, Austen's family confirmed that the girl was Jane Austen. However, the lecturer explains that endorsment was almost 70 years after Austen's dead and none of the family had seen her before, so they couldn't know her certain.
Second, the face in the portrait is similar to the one in Cassadra's sketch. In contrats, the speaker explains that some girls of Austen's family are so similar to Jane Austen. Thus, the portrait can belong to one of her distant family.
Third, the style of portrait is like Ozias Humphery who was living in the same time to Austen. On the other hand, the professor says that the style is totally different. He also explains that there is a stamp on the back of canvas which declare that the seller of canvas is William Leg. And William Leg didn't sell the canvas in London untile Austen was 27 years old. So in the time of portrait, Austen was older.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...the family had seen her before, so they couldnt know her certain. Second, the face in ...
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Line 4, column 303, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... canvas is William Leg. And William Leg didnt sell the canvas in London untile Austen...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the time of portrait, Austen was older.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, third, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1373.03311258 66% => OK
No of words: 198.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18605205552 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520202020202 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 419.366225166 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1273147287 49.2860985944 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0833333333 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387981554042 0.272083759551 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161248862148 0.0996497079465 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176703853539 0.0662205650399 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254501862661 0.162205337803 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667352424047 0.0443174109184 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.2367328918 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 63.6247240618 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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