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The article states that the Salton sea in california now are going to be more salty beacuse of high evaporatiom rate and suppose three solution. However the professor explain that all soloution are not practical and are unrealistic and reftes each of author's reasons.
To begin with the reading states that they can use special desalinization in order to seprate salt from water.The professor reject this point by saying that this can lead to some problems because some toxic materials would be produced and these material would threaten people's health.
Second, the reading argue that the other possible soloution is diluting lake's water with water from the ocean. The professor opposes this point and say that these method requires contruction of a long pipeline and it is too costly, and goeverment may not have enough financial resource for it.
Third, the reading contends that the other solution is dividing lake by construction of a wall. However, thethe professor explain that it would work for a short time, and some geotechnical activity could destroy these walls, as a result, the salty water would be mixed with all the freshwater.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ratiom rate and suppose three solution. However the professor explain that all soloutio...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and reftes each of authors reasons. To begin with the reading states that th...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ion in order to seprate salt from water.The professor reject this point by saying t...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'rejects'.
Suggestion: rejects
...o seprate salt from water.The professor reject this point by saying that this can lead...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erial would threaten peoples health. Second, the reading argue that the other...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'these methods'?
Suggestion: this method; these methods
...ofessor opposes this point and say that these method requires contruction of a long pipeline...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve enough financial resource for it. Third, the reading contends that the oth...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...would be mixed with all the freshwater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, so, third, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 1373.03311258 70% => OK
No of words: 188.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14361702128 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5370667682 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 419.366225166 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5050175015 49.2860985944 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.142857143 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0938258333396 0.272083759551 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061538103436 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098491607986 0.0662205650399 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597031945412 0.162205337803 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597031945412 0.0443174109184 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.