(male professor) The reading's arguments that the photographic negatives were created by Ansel Adams are not convincing. It's true that the negatives have some similarities to Adams'work, but there are explanations for those similarities.
First, the leaning pine tree appears in one of the negatives, well, this tree is not just a random tree that Ansel Adams took a liking to. In fact, this tree is famous landmark in Yosemite National Park. The park has hundreds of thousands of visitors in the 1920s. And the pine tree captured on the negative happened to be one of its most visited sites. Because the tree was such a popular symbol of Yosemite, a lot of photographers, not just Ansel Adams, are known to have taken photographs of it.
Second, the handwriting on the envelopes, as you read, some of the envelopes have a place name written on them, for example, names of famous Yosemite landmarks. But the person who wrote the names of the locations on the envelopes did not spell some of them correctly. Now, Virginia Adams grew up in Yosemite. Her father was an artist who had an art studio in the park, so she knew Yosemite very well. Does it really make sense that she would misspell place names familiar to her since childhood?
Third, about fire damage to the negatives, the process that photographers use to create negatives in the 1920s was dangerous. It involved using highly flammable chemicals. And these chemicals could cause a fire to start very easily. So a fire in a photographer's studio was not an unusual occurrence in those days and a great number of professional photographers had work that was damaged by fire.
The article states that negatives, actual images on film or glass, had been found in envelopes are related to Ansel Adams, a most famous photographer in the USA, and provides three reasons to support. However, the professor explains that these images might be similar to Adams' work but these reasons are not convincing and refutes each of the authour's reasons.
First, the reading claims that an specific tree's image is known taked by Adams. The professor opposes this point by saying that the tree is a popular tree and located in natioal park in the United States. while the park has many visitors, alot of photographers could take photo of the tree.
Second, the article posits that the envelopes had a handwritten mark resembled Adams' wife. In contrast, the professor says that Adams' wife was a artist and should not write a mark with misspelling words.
Third, the reading says that fire had destroyed or damaged many of Adams' work and a number of the negatives had a sign of fire. The professor cast doubt on this point by explaining that fire in artists' houses is not unusual thing because in many atrists houses there are chemical substances which strat fire easily. He also states that the negatives might is related to the other photographer who his house experienced fire and his work damaged by fire.
time 25 min
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...d in natioal park in the United States. while the park has many visitors, alot of pho...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the professor says that Adams wife was a artist and should not write a mark with...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Time
...d fire and his work damaged by fire. time 25 min
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 229.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84279475983 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42817535296 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56768558952 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9077921912 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.818181818 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190617099467 0.272083759551 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654821735674 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508968684665 0.0662205650399 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100859939085 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320673609126 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.