Migrating to a new city or country is indeed a tricky thing to do. Personally, I believe that migration is beneficial for individuals. I thinks this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, typically, people won't lose their old friends by migration. You can still be in contact with your old friends even after migration. Due to the development of digital technology, today, we live in a gigantic city called Earth. People can easily contact with their friends living thousants of kilometers away. Therefore, individuals can live far away from their friends, but be in contact with them. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. Two years ago, a friend of mine decided to continue her education in a foreign country in Europe. Even though there is a large distance between us, our relationship has not been deteriorated. We still see each other on video calls once or twice a week, send messages, and even go out with each other when she visits her old city.
Secondly, people can build new relationships after migration. It's tough at the beginning, but you will gradually find new friends in the new environment. For instance, when I was 18 years old, I migrated to Tehran for my Bachelor's degree. After a few months, I managed to find some new friends with whom I currently have very close relationships. They are from diverse cultural backgrounds, so they have different attitudes, and I have learned lots of new things from them. I wouldn't be able to find friends from diverse cultures if I hadn't moved here.
Finally, migration can be pretty influential on the quality of your life. You will probably have more job opportunities in other cities, consequently, moving to these cities will provide you with better options compared to your current inhabitant. For example, I don't have lots of job opportunities in my country, but I have plenty of options in the United States, so moving there will probably lead to my professional progression; and therefore, the quality of my life will be improved. and although, as I mentioned at the beginning of this essay, migration is tough, it has several advantages that overcome its drawbacks.
In summary, I am of the opinion that migration is a good thing for people. I feel this way because, first, you will still keep your old friends. Second, you will find new friends, and third, you will have more job options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, for example, for instance, i feel, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 22.412803532 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1373.03311258 134% => OK
No of words: 377.0 270.72406181 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86737400531 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79911112906 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 145.348785872 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554376657825 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 419.366225166 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 3.25607064018 553% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.51434878587 528% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1162431959 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4090909091 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177255919762 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054739862983 0.0996497079465 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525615785677 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119573613736 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498193894133 0.0443174109184 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 63.6247240618 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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