Migrating to a new city or country is indeed a tricky thing to do. Personally, I believe that migration is beneficial for individuals. I thinks this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, typically, people won't lose their old friends by migration. You can still be in contact with your old friends even after migration. Due to the development of digital technology, today, we live in a gigantic city called Earth. People can easily contact with their friends living thousants of kilometers away. Therefore, individuals can keep their friends despite the distance. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. Two years ago, a friend of mine decided to continue her education in a foreign country in Europe. Even though there is a large distance between us, our relationship has not been deteriorated. We still see eachother on video calls once or twice a week, we send massages, and even we still go out with eachother when she visits her old city.
Secondly, people can build new relationships after migration. Although tough at the begining, you will gradually find new friends in the new environment. For instance, when I was 18 years old, I migrated to Tehran for my Bachelor's degree. After a few months I managed to find some new friends that currently have very close relationships with. I wouldn't be able to find friends from diverse cultures if I hadn't moved to here.
Finally, migration can be pretty influential on the quality of your life. It is probable that you will have better job opportunities in other cities, consiquently, moving to these cities will provide you with better options compared to your current inhabitant. For example, I have many job oportunities in United states that I don't have here due to my field of study, and although, as I mentioned at the begining of this essay, migration is tough, it has several of advantages that overcome its flawbacks.
In summary, I am of the opinion that migration is a good thing for people. I feel this way because, first, you will still keep your old friends. Second, you will find new friends, and third, you will have more job options.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many jobs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, for example, for instance, i feel, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 22.412803532 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 333.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87087087087 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76828668293 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 145.348785872 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 3.25607064018 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8054405179 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177774425869 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553295535129 0.0996497079465 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547833106992 0.0662205650399 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121410047482 0.162205337803 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500444402419 0.0443174109184 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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