The minimum wage is set by the government and is the lowest hourly wage a business can pay an employee. For example, if the minimum wage of a country is $5.25 per hour, then businesses cannot pay their employees any less than this. However, because of the many disadvantages that the minimum wage has caused for businesses and workers, minimum wage laws should be abolished.
First, the minimum wage makes workers too expensive for some businesses, especially smaller businesses. If the minimum wage is set at $5.25 and a small business owner can only afford to hire someone at $5.00 an hour, both are at a disadvantage because of the minimum wage. The business owner cannot hire as many workers as he or she likes. Also, potential workers for that business remain unemployed. For this reason, minimum wages can raise unemployment rates.
In addition, the minimum wage encourages larger businesses to move their production out of one country and into another. Since some foreign countries may not have minimum wage laws, labor in these countries can cost much less than labor in a country with such laws in place. This can ultimately hurt the parent country because many larger businesses choose to relocate to a foreign country, removing a number of jobs in the process.
Finally, the minimum wage encourages companies to purchase machine technology that can replace workers. If it is less expensive for a company to purchase an automated machine to do a task than it is to pay an employee to do the same job, the business will undoubtedly purchase the machine. If the cost of labor remains low, however, companies are less likely to replace workers with automated machine systems.
The article asserts that the minimum wage law has a negative effect on employment rate, employers , and whole economy, then it should be abolished. However the professor does not believe so and avers that minimum wage does not effects not only employment rate negatively, but also the employers. She thinks that this law should keep on.
First, the reading material states that the minimum wage law makes many buisness unprofitable through making the employees more expensive, specially small buisnesses, consequentely it cause a decrease in employment rate, which is not good for economy. On the other hand, the lecturer refutes this points by saying that data shows that niether before nor after applying this law unemployment rate affected. She mentions that there is no difference between employment rate before and after the law. Hence, this law doees not have any positive or negative effect on economy only by itself.
Second, the author claims that minimum wage law cause larger companies move to other countries where they do not have this mandatory law. It mentions that it affects the first country's economy negatively. Conversely, the professor repudiates this idea and explains that it is true that companies move to another country, but it is not because of minimum wage law. If they prefer to move to another country, the lower living cost in those countries encourage them. She avers that this minimum wage law does not have any impact on this movement.
Third, the passage posits that this law motivate companies to repalce labore with machine technology, everywhere it is possible for them. It concluds that if wage remains low, companies do not use those machines and they hire more workers. Controversially, the lecturer opposes this by mentioning that using machine technology does absolutly not have any impact on the hiring of workers. She believes that companies look at the saving benefit of this approach to use machines. She says that minimum wage law does certainely not have negative effect on employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, hence, however, if, look, second, so, then, third, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 22.412803532 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 331.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15407854985 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59586135094 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507552870091 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4019841028 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.352941176 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201546709809 0.272083759551 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755489206859 0.0996497079465 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557779361239 0.0662205650399 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136325195926 0.162205337803 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034324217851 0.0443174109184 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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