My way of life versus my parents way of life.Which way of life would you want future generations to follow.
My way of life versus my parents way of life? Now there are some people who would want the coming generations to have lifestyle similar to our parents while there are others who would want them to have lifestyle similar to ours. I personally prefer our parents way of life.
Now obviously people opting for our way of life have there own valid reasons. It is true that we today have many more kinds of entertainment facilities available. There are various kinds of professions which we can now opt for. But despite of all this I still feel life of parents was better.
Firstly, there was much less competition in every field then. Be it getting into a good college or securing a good job everything has become much more difficult than it previously was. The main reason for this is population increase. Today the population has increased many folds but the number of good colleges and job opportunities have not increased to that extent. This has inturn resulted in more stress in today's generation and that too at a very early stage in life.
Second reason why I feel that our parents way of life was better is because of less exposure to technology. Because of these advent in technology children today have never experienced what it is to go outside and play physical sports. This in turn is making them fat which can lead to many health issues in there future. Today even small children have accounts on instagram , snapchat and tiktok. And they spend majority of there time on these.
Thus, I prefer our parents way of life because it allowed our parents to be both mentally and physically fit. So because of all these reasons I feel the future generations should have the life which is more inspired by our parents way of life. For this I feel the government should build more advanced colleges and provide more job opportnities so that there is less stress among people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, then, thus, while, i feel, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68975903614 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46283231676 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7866047694 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.85 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370363833798 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127798122012 0.0996497079465 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190864949892 0.0662205650399 288% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225605290248 0.162205337803 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167777380618 0.0443174109184 379% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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